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For my first summer lying Junior. we have to tell everyone what 10 food you would take onto a boat seal but you had no frig My ones were Chess, fruit, chips, dark chocolate water, fruit salad, nuts, bars, cookie. there is 10 of the things i would take on a boat sail.blog you later bye
posted by Anonymous @ December 17, 2019
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1 Comments:
Mālō e lelei Isaac,
Thank you for doing week one, day one, activity one! The items you’ve listed to take on a three-week ocean voyage very practical.
You have done the activity correctly Isaac, however I have had a look at some of your other posts and I can see how smart and creative you are. I think you have the potential to put more detail and thought into your posts, what do you think?
In order to get the full points for your future posts, it would be great to see some more information and detail, and even some images if you wanted to - for example in this post you could’ve added some images and talked about why you chose those foods specifically.
Have another look at the activity instructions and add some more writing and detail to the rest of your posts, you can also add pictures too - this will make your blog more eye-catching!
Well done for posting and I look forward to seeing more detail, information and images in your future posts.
Have a fantastic afternoon!
Eliza :)
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